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Engl 1113 Freshman Composition I Portfolio

Like many colleges and universities, OSU-Okmulgee is using a portfolio assessment system for writing classes.  Portfolio assessment enables you to present your best, revised writing to a committee of writing instructors who specialize in teaching writing skills.  The portfolio system increases consistency in grading among participating teachers; writing for an audience of several teachers instead of just one also prepares you to write for other instructors.  You should feel confident that if you pass your portfolio review, your writing compares favorably with that of most students who complete English 1113 at OSU-Okmulgee.

Portfolio Rationale

As 20% of your final grade, the portfolio is designed to achieve several purposes:

  1. to show pride in your writing by presenting your best, revised writing for this semester

  2. to encourage you to revise and to apply concepts learned later in the course to earlier papers

  3. to demonstrate an entire process from invention to the finished essay

  4. to allow your instructor to view your total progress throughout the course

  5. to support the concept of an audience beyond an individual instructor

A committee of English 1113 instructors, including your instructor, will evaluate your portfolio and judge it a Pass (A, B, or C work) or a No Pass (D or F work).  Your instructor will then assign it an appropriate letter grade to account for the 20% of your overall grade in the course.

Self-Evaluation Essay for Portfolio

Your self-evaluation is an important part of your portfolio grade.  There is no "right" answer; instead, you should honestly evaluate your strengths and weakness as a writer and critically assess your progress this semester. Your self-evaluation essay must be at least 1½ pages long.

The following four points must be addressed in your essay, and each body paragraph must discuss one of the issues raised. Make sure that your essay has an introduction and conclusion as well as a clear thesis and clear topic sentences

  1. Explain which of the revised essays you consider your best or favorite and what its strengths are. Discuss structure and style, not content.

  2. Using an example from one of your essays, discuss a writing strategy or an element of style you can use now that you didn’t know about before. How has this helped you become a better writer? Be specific.

  3. Do you think the portfolio as a whole offers an accurate portrait of you as a writer?  If so, how?   If not, what should be changed so that it might represent you better?

  4. If you could go back in time and take this class over, what would you do differently? Explain.

Portfolio Guidelines

Please arrange your papers in the following sections as listed below. In the upper right-hand corner, label the first page of each section of the portfolio with the appropriate heading listed below (bold type). Bind your portfolio in a folder with metal prong fasteners (no 3-ring binders) and place clearly marked dividers between each section (your instructor has an example)

  • Self-Evaluation

  • Divider

  • Essay A—Writer’s Choice

    • Final revised draft

    • Graded essay, all drafts, critique papers, and prewriting
  • Divider
  • Analysis for Essay A (revised version)
  • Divider
  • Essay B--Illustration
    • Final revised draft
    • Graded essay
  • Divider
  • Essay C--Narrative
    • Final revised draft
    • Graded essay
  • Divider
  • Five Daily Writings

 

Example:

 

Wesley Crusher                                                                                       Essay B--Illustration

Picard - 10:30

Engl 1113-008

October 24, 2005

 

Applications of the Prime Directive


Essay Analysis of Essay 1 for Portfolio

Part of being a good writer is knowing how to control what you write.  In order to accomplish that, you must first analyze and explain your writing process.  When you write this analysis, visualize a group of teachers wanting to hear an explanation about how you control your writing process.  That's exactly what they'll want to read in your portfolio. 

Remember, you must have an introduction with a thesis statement, a body with topic sentences and support, and a conclusion.  The body of your essay should discuss the following:

•    Prewriting and Planning

What kind of strategies did you use to get started? 

How did you narrow your topic? 

How did you come up with a main idea?  Was that difficult?  Why?

Did you have a purpose when you began? 

If you didn't have a purpose, how did that affect your paper?

•    Drafting

Did you have trouble with the introduction?  If so, what did you do about it? 

How did you decide which examples to use?

Did you consider what readers might know about the topic? 

How did that affect what you wrote--or did it? 

How did you decide which information to include and which to leave out? 

What kind of organization did you use? 

•    Revising

What was the biggest problem with your essay? 

How did you revise so you could eliminate that problem? 

If you had one more day to work on your essay, what would you change? 

The essay analysis should be 1½ to 2 pages in length.

 


English 1113 Portfolio Scoring Guidelines

OSU-Okmulgee

Portfolios will be evaluated either as Pass (A, B, or C work) or No Pass (D or F work).  The following criteria will be used in determining grades:

 

Pass
Complete portfolio in proper format  
Self-evaluation awareness of self as a writer
ability to critically analyze self as a writer

Revised essays A and B and C

content is adequate
good organization/clear introduction, body, and conclusion
topic is well-supported with clear thesis and topic sentences
correct sentence structure
some (but not many) grammatical/mechanical errors
awareness of audience
substantial revision
Analysis of the writing process for Essay A attention to revision rather than proofreading
clear understanding of the writing process
application of writing process to successive draft
No Pass
Incomplete portfolio/complete disregard for presentation detail  
Self-evaluation little awareness of the steps involved in successful writing
comments regarding self as writer bear little or no relationship to work in portfolio
Revised essays A and B and C inadequate content
poor organization
inadequate or poor support for topic
superficial revision
Analysis of writing process for Essay A multiple drafts that show little attention to the revision process
little evidence of understanding the writing process (collecting, shaping, drafting, revising), or inability to apply that understanding to the drafts included in portfolio.

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